This is a discussion on Open to suggestion within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Originally Posted by Marko
Welcome cadcamslave!
The lines are a prominent feature in shot 1 and I like them, but ...
The lines are a prominent feature in shot 1 and I like them, but overall i find the shot is missing something. I'd like the lines to lead somewhere, interesting, or colourful but they just lead to the distance with nothing to hold my eye. The sky in the shot is a bit 'weak' and needs more meat imo. This could have been accomplished with a polarizer during shooting or more burning in now in post.
I like shot 2 as it's pretty peaceful. I wish the bird was sharper though.
Hope that helps - Marko
The original image is a 9.8meg Nikon RAW file and the bird is sharper in it.
Thanks for your input, I appreciate any and all I can get.
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