Looks nice too me....

I like the sky texture..... some shadows maybe lost on the left side...

I'm with you on the shooting black in white thru your cam.... I can't shoot B&W any other way... most people say to shoot always in colour and convert to B&W so you have more to play with... this is logical but doesn't seem to jive with the romance of shooting B&W in the moment...

question: was the shot underexposed to begin with?