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This is a discussion on Self Portrait II within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; this is another attempt at a self portrait. I messed with it in photo shop and this is what I ...

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    this is another attempt at a self portrait. I messed with it in photo shop and this is what I got out of it. Enjoy.

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    focus seems spot on and the angle gives the image a more dynamic feel. damn i sound like a prof....

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    Quote Originally Posted by ArtTwisted View Post
    focus seems spot on and the angle gives the image a more dynamic feel. damn i sound like a prof....

    "prof" as in Professor or as in Professional? thanks for the comment. I think it took 20 shots before I accually got the focus right. focusing with a DSLR is a whole lot harder than a point and shoot. Unless its just my camera.
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    Cool stuff! Focusing- It's probably not harder. Just a whole lot more precise.

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    Quote Originally Posted by JAS_Photo View Post
    Cool stuff! Focusing- It's probably not harder. Just a whole lot more precise.
    Yea that I have noticed. I just really got to learn about exposure.
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    Now that's a vast improvement on your 1st effort Kevin! Top marks for taking the advice given and coming back so quickly with a better shot.

    No distractions, sharp eye ... good work.

    About the only thing I can see is you might have over-exposed the face in a couple of spots. The skin appears a bit bright on the bridge of your nose and inner cheek area.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kevin.OBrien View Post
    "prof" as in Professor or as in Professional? thanks for the comment. I think it took 20 shots before I accually got the focus right. focusing with a DSLR is a whole lot harder than a point and shoot. Unless its just my camera.
    the former , and I find using the manual focus makes portraits a lot easier, auto focus has a tendency to focus on the eye lashes or on the nose too much.

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