it's been a while since I put one in this section. So in addition to the general critique, my question is 'does the blurry foreground work?'
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This is a discussion on pine cone within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; it's been a while since I put one in this section. So in addition to the general critique, my question ...
it's been a while since I put one in this section. So in addition to the general critique, my question is 'does the blurry foreground work?'
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It's well exposed, seems to be in fine focus and the blurry foreground totally works. The composition seems a little weak to me though, Bambi. I'm thinking rule of thirds might have helped here and you might save it with a crop.
I'm going to say ... sweet stuff all! I like this fine as it is and really have nothing to offer Bambi. I'm happy with the composition. The DOF has kept a full line of interest across the photo and the bokeh being a major part of the composition really gives the feeling that we are on tippy toes to see over this branch.
Good work! Another fine example of your 'step up' lately!
works for me!
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thanks everyone for the input.
Iggy I knew I was breaking the rule of thirds but I wanted to keep both the cone on the right and the branch on the left (and you know I like symmetry-which is something that doesn't always work). I will try the crop and re-post. If I have to pick I think I will lose the other pine cone and keep the branch.
Feel free to make comments on any of my shots
my blog: http://bambesblog.blogspot.com/
My flickr photostream: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bambe1964/
A painter takes their vision and makes it a reality. A photographer takes reality and makes it their vision.
I am with MA on this one B.....I like the comp and the blurry foreground....the fact that the pinecone is nice and sharp draws the eye right to the image. And I LOVE the Bokeh in the background.To me it tell a story of the viewer finding a special something in the forest...I like it and I really like what you did with it.
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