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This is a discussion on pine cone within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; it's been a while since I put one in this section. So in addition to the general critique, my question ...

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    it's been a while since I put one in this section. So in addition to the general critique, my question is 'does the blurry foreground work?'

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    It's well exposed, seems to be in fine focus and the blurry foreground totally works. The composition seems a little weak to me though, Bambi. I'm thinking rule of thirds might have helped here and you might save it with a crop.
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    I'm going to say ... sweet stuff all! I like this fine as it is and really have nothing to offer Bambi. I'm happy with the composition. The DOF has kept a full line of interest across the photo and the bokeh being a major part of the composition really gives the feeling that we are on tippy toes to see over this branch.

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    works for me!
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    thanks everyone for the input.

    Iggy I knew I was breaking the rule of thirds but I wanted to keep both the cone on the right and the branch on the left (and you know I like symmetry-which is something that doesn't always work ). I will try the crop and re-post. If I have to pick I think I will lose the other pine cone and keep the branch.
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    I am with MA on this one B.....I like the comp and the blurry foreground....the fact that the pinecone is nice and sharp draws the eye right to the image. And I LOVE the Bokeh in the background. To me it tell a story of the viewer finding a special something in the forest...I like it and I really like what you did with it.
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