Street Photography and B&W

[Matt K.]

I have to concur with Fortytwo; the first image sends my head tilting to the right - the buildings on the left side are overpowering and seem to want you 'duck' for cover. Have you tired to straighten the image?

The second image id confusing for me. You have several things showing: the broken palster, the lamp and the top of the gate. I am sure that each one of these objects would have made a great image on their own, but combined it really leaves you wondering what is is you want to express. And yes, it is composition more so than any technical critizism.

Love the bug. Would have like to see more in front of it, or do you want to draw attention to the archtecture more so than the vehicle? If the beetle is your subject, then putting it more into the center would have helped. If you want to show the doorways, differnt story. Then the VW is actually in the way.

Technically the shots are very good . It's more the composition I question. Keep it up!

[Marko]

Hi fsendel - thx for the comments!

I would agree with the above critiques.

I'd also like to add that overall these shots are not that 'exciting' to me.

The excitement does not need to come from 'action', it could come from mood, tonality, angularity, dramatic light, contrast, perspective, selective focus, a story etc.

shot 1 is the strongest here for me as I like the repeating elements and lines. To improve it, imo, more has to be going on for this particular view. We see the backside of a man and a dog in the distance, but everything is too far from the viewer. The closest thing to us are the window grates on the left side and for me, they lack interest shot at this angle.

Hope that helped somewhat,

Thx - Marko

[casil403]

I think a different crop would make this first image much stonger IMO....the elements of a great image are there. it there it just needs stronger composition which i think you can accomplish with a different crop.
What I would do (and it's just my opinion so feel free to take it or leave it as after all it is your photo) is a left vertical crop to eliminate the first window grate. Next, I would crop the bottom up about 1.5cm to get it in line with the second window (which would then be the first after the left crop) and bring the man closer to the foreground. Eliminate the top of the shot with the distracting lamp post. I think a square crop would be the result here which I think IMO would make for a much stronger story.
Also throw in a few tonal adjustments to whiten the whites, darken the darks and bring out the cloud detail I think you might have a winner.

That's my thoughts on it anyhow. Hope it helps.

[fsendel]

Thanks to everyone for your comments, I'm not sure if this is common practice, but now I'd like to comment on your comments.

Fortytwo: (I'm a huge Douglas Adams fan btw!), regarding the first shot, I have taken your advice and part of casil403s, and Matt Ks, and have tried to do some corrections. I straightened and cropped. You are right about the halo near the building's edge, I just couldn't get rid of it after trying to recover the near blown out sky.

Second shot: Well, I'm not exactly sure what caught my eye. I guess it was mostly the lamp and the decaying plaster, but you are right. It's not terribly exciting. I probably thought it could convey some of the area's mood, somewhat old and partly falling apart.

Third shot: I couldn't have shot the front of the car, and I didn't want to center it too much and tried to vaguely use the rule of thirds. I'll try to increase the contrast, but I was afraid of losing some of the detail, especially where you can see the VWs shadows.

Marko, thanks for your comments too. I'm a big fan of the podcast but only now have started participating. After all this feedback I'll definitely posto a lot more! I have learned a lot. As to the lack of excitement you refer to, I think I get it but I'm not 100% sure. I'll try to work on it for my next post.

I'm including a new version of the first shot, hopefully its better:







This is my flickr stream by the way:
Flickr: fsendel's Photostream

[JAS_Photo]

That works much better. Stick with the forum and you will learn lots. And its free!

Here are three basic points to remember when taking a photo;

1. What is my subject?

2. How can I focus attention on my subject? (i.e. Leading lines, rule of thirds, framing, DOF, etc.)

3. Simplify. Is there anything in the photo that is taking attention away from the subject? Any distracting elements?

[Richard]

Hi fsendel, It looks a lot better now! Photoshop has some neat perspective tools as well that can help combat leaning buildings and architecture.

Photoshop Box Tutorials - Fix Perspective

[Fortytwo]

Do please reply to my comments! The more feedback, the better!

Oh, that new version is much better. Feels much more balanced to me. Nice job! Halo's can be really troublesome, and considering the other option is a blown out sky, I'd pick this as well. It doesn't bother me that much...

About the third shot, I was afraid that wasn't possible. In that case, it's good you've left some room at the back. Otherwise it'd be really crammed in the frame...