Starting out on Fashion Photography. Please Feedback!

[alfsaav]

I love fashion and beauty, so I've decided I want to get serious about fashion photography. This is my first official photo shot (official as we dedicated specific time and resources for this set of pics to happen). Please feel welcome to tear down the composition, technicalities, and post processing on the pics. I really want to improve and I don't mind the heat as long as is elaborated. Avoid comments such as: Awesome! Nice! Good job! I appreciate that, but they don't help me much.

Model: Hye Eun
Location: Pohang, South Kora
Camera: My Loyal Nikon D300
Lenses: Nikkor 35mm F1.8 and Nikkor 55-200mm VR
Environment: Ambient Light
Assistant: Momo, thanks for translating and playing being the assistant, carrying the gear (Camera lenses, coats and my pokemon lunch-box)

We had lots of fun shooting, and I hope we can repeat soon.

I included some of the photos as attachments in this thread, but if you want to see the whole series, please visit "Sunset and Cappuccinos" series on my Flickr

Thank you, my work is yours to critique!