Very interesting image. Technically, there is nothing you could have done better, imho. Theme wise ... hmmm ... One thing I would watch for, though: having the hands on the pane of glass makes them unusually big for a slim woman like that, they almost look like a man's hands. The wires, well, I suppose this is up to interpretation. I wonder if some other means of entanglement would have suited the title better.

The look in her eyes is perfect, though. Overall it is a very nice capture...