it's a nice set of what looks like a fun day. In all the eyes seem to be a bit soft but I think you could fix it.
IMO the best one is the second one - in the pile of pumpkins- it has great colour and tells a story for me. I like the one of the girl passing the small pumpkin but it's a bit soft and you cut off the bottom of the pumpkin and her hand.
I think you need to figure out the focal point (in this case the eyes) and really work on it.
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