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second time. Fly. FLy macro. please help me comment my photos.

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    Nice and sharp macros. The colours are really cool too. I like them.

    Just as an observation, it appears you may have some dust on your sensor.
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    Thank you for comment. I am seen the point in my sensor after i finish it. I am cleared. Thank you.
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    macros are sharp overall - nice job.
    Personally though, the processing feels a bit overdone to me and it may have accentuated the noise/grain.
    Sensor should cleaned as mentioned, but these things are easily cloned out.
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    Thank you for comment. I will follow your comment next time. Thank you very much.
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    May be it is better to sharpen only the fly rather than overall.
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    Good depth of field and lots of detail, however, as Marko pointed out they seem a little over processed to me. Nice macro shots in general though.
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