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The River in January

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    The North Saskatchewan River from Downtown Edmonton.

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    Great shot Robert. My only little critique is that the boat is lost in the shadows. If you could bring the white out of the boat a little
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    Is this roughly what you had in mind?

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    Great shot Robert. My only little critique is that the boat is lost in the shadows. If you could bring the white out of the boat a little
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    Quote Originally Posted by Robert1950 View Post
    Is this roughly what you had in mind?



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    Exactly!!!!
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    I like this image - AT suggestion works!
    I still might try to open up more blacks overall to see if it would help even further.
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