Results 1 to 4 of 4

Sunriver, OR USA

This is a discussion on Sunriver, OR USA within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Here's a shot I took in Sunriver Oregon. I was thrilled when I found the location. Beautiful sky, trees, river, ...

  1. #1
    landon9720 is offline Member
    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Posts
    37

    Default Sunriver, OR USA

    Here's a shot I took in Sunriver Oregon. I was thrilled when I found the location. Beautiful sky, trees, river, and grass. I think this is the best of the bunch (you can see the others I took by browsing starting here http://flickr.com/photos/landon9720/2751959717/) but I'm not satisfied with it. The trees in particular look colorless and washed out. I did apply some white balance and color correction in Picasa. Please let me know what you think...


  2. #2
    Travis is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Huntsville Muskoka
    Posts
    678

    Default

    it's look a little warm IMO but of course this is up to you and your tastes..... this would be better as landscape rather than portraiture....IMO there is too much sky and a lot of it could be cropped out to make the image more efffective...

    I like it though....

    ps - not sure if you are happy with the sharpening effect.... Picasa's sharpening tool is a blunt instrument of destruction....

    either way I find the image warm and pleasing..

    btw... welcome to the forum...
    ______________________

    Nikon D300, Nikkor 24-70 2.8 . Nikkor 70-200 2.8 . Nikkor 50mm 1.8 . Sigma 105mm 2.8 . Tokina 12-24 4 . SB-600 . 2xVivitar 285

  3. #3
    tirediron is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jul 2008
    Posts
    1,201

    Default

    Agree with Travis' comments concerning image orientation. Additionally, this is a case where a 2 stop graduated neutral density filter would have taken the sky from nice to 'Wow!'. Good job.

  4. #4
    tegan is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Canada
    Posts
    948

    Default

    I think this shot really needs a centre of interest..something that really draws and focuses the eye of the viewer. A big moose standing out in the grass would have been perfect, but then photographers can't always get what they want.

    Tegan
    "Photographic art requires the technical aspects of photography and the design aspects of art, both at an outstanding level."

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36