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    Default Really like this one, what do you think?

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    I like the colours; I also like the composition, it works very well here. However, I think when you use your lens that wide open to achieve the bokeh, some part of the plant should be in real good focus. Seems to me that there is a bit of softness in the image, which takes away from it a bit. Maybe if you stopped down by a couple of stops you could still have the bokeh, but your depth of field would increase and render more sharpness.
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    I love the colors! Great shot .

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    It's close, but I think the main subject needs more depth of field; the yellow highlight to the left draws too much attention for it. The exposure is nice as is the color. Maybe change positions so you can play with backgrounds.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Matt K. View Post
    I like the colours; I also like the composition, it works very well here. However, I think when you use your lens that wide open to achieve the bokeh, some part of the plant should be in real good focus. Seems to me that there is a bit of softness in the image, which takes away from it a bit. Maybe if you stopped down by a couple of stops you could still have the bokeh, but your depth of field would increase and render more sharpness.
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    Thanks all. Much appreciated.
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