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Girl from country side.

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    I am not so sure about this picture but ve been keeping it for sometime now, sympathizing this cute little lady of the mountains. I don't know what exactly but it didn't somewhat work for me. Can you help, Suggest and/or comment.
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    Wonderful colour here! However, the eyes are not sharp.
    The blanket is the sharpest thing in the image which is an error imo. Always focus on the eyes. If autofocus won't get you sharp eyes, switch to manual. This image could have been excellent if the eyes were tack sharp.
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    To add to Marko's comment which I agree with ... I think goat behind the head is a distraction as well rather an element that places her environmentally.

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    Thanks Marko & Mad Aussie for your comments
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    I'm going to chime in and just lend weight to the already perfect assessment. It's a wonderful image other than the out of focus eyes and face.
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    The only thing I would add beyond what has already been mentioned is that I wish you would post more images for us.
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