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    This is my friend doing a backside 180 but I'm not sure I like the angle or the comp. tell me what you would like more in this picture
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    I like what you did here with the "multi-exposure" look of the shot. The bottom of the shot, however, is much too large and I would crop 80% of that empty space away. Also, it's a shame that the model is cut in half in the last shot, better to not have that shot in the mix at all rather than have it cut off. Oh, and I guess I'm officially an old fogey now as you should tell him to pull up his pants
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    thanks! exactly what i was looking for

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