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    I really like what you were going for here, Skippy but the focus is off. It really should be on the eye and not the eye lashes. Either a larger DOF or change the focus point.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Iguanasan View Post
    I really like what you were going for here, Skippy but the focus is off. It really should be on the eye and not the eye lashes. Either a larger DOF or change the focus point.
    thank for the tips!

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    Quote Originally Posted by SteveFrancis View Post
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    What do u mean?

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