This is very good, I especially like the strong composition.
Cheers
taffy
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This is very good, I especially like the strong composition.
Cheers
taffy
Really nice compostition. Only thing is that I feel my eyes are focusing more on the rocks in front than the lighthouse. You could try to burn/dodge a little![]()
Yeah, that's what I thought. The large rock in the foreground dominates a little too much...
Otherwise, great shot.
This is a very strong image undeed, well done.
Agree with fante, you could dodge the lighthouse a wee bit more.
A very slight crop on the left side might also help the composition (not sure).
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Excellent use of leading lines to guide the eye to the main subject, however agree with the others that the foreground is too strong; my suggestion would be to recrop in portrait aspect with the light of the lighthouse positioned at the upper-left third.
I get the feeling of literally being PULLED INTO the image! Well done! Very well done!
Thanks everyone for the great feedback.
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