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    Hello, I'm new to this forum and I've learned a lot from everyone who have donated their time to critique people's photos. I was on a photowalk in Chinatown SF this last weekend and shot a couple that I think have potential but are missing something. Comments? Suggestions please?
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    I think it's missing a particular focal point ... something that provides a specific point of interest.

    Also, it's leaning a little to the left.

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    I agree w/MA.

    Had the tractor been closer, that would have done it.
    That said, this is a really neat perspective!
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    I know I like it a lot more when I scroll the page up to crop it just above the top of the bridge. Interesting looking place and I can certainly see what drew your attention as it's a very cool perspective.
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