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marko gives a very good critique here. the biggest issue is the sharpness.
This is a discussion on Please Critique this photo within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; marko gives a very good critique here. the biggest issue is the sharpness....
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marko gives a very good critique here. the biggest issue is the sharpness.
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I have to agree with Marko. I was looking at this one and couldn't quite put my finger on it and thought I'd come back to it later and then I read Marko's post and voila, that was it for me. Now if you just had someone with an 8' or 10' reflector shining some light on the front of that train as you captured it with a clear focus then it would have been perfect!For me the front of the train is the subject and because it's a little dark and a little out of focus it's just not doing it for me. Composition and point of view is excellent.
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