It's a terrible shame that not every thread gets noticed the first time through but please don't be afraid to add a post - even if all it says is "bump" - to put it back on people's radar. It's almost always a case of getting missed and not "ignored".

I can appreciate what you were trying to do here but there's something missing for me. I'm not a big fan of the composition. The newspaper box and the headline are the subject and just about everything else is distracting, however, just a shot of the newspaper box might not be as interesting either. My eyes keep getting pulled to the sign for "Ham Steak...". The newspaper box almost gets lost.

Have to run right now but maybe I can look again later when I have more time to provide some decent comments.

Cheers!