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Toward the Light

This is a discussion on Toward the Light within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; It's interesting in that today I didn't think I had any images of any note, but I do like these ...

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    It's interesting in that today I didn't think I had any images of any note, but I do like these once I've worked them up a little and "presented" them...

    This is one of those things where in the past, I've waited to get people *out* of my shot, and now, something that other photogs do is wait for someone to come *into* the shot to make it less empty - this was one of those...

    *Slightly* unfortunate that I missed the edge of the gate in the shot, but otherwise I like it...

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    Overall, I like the image, but, there's something, upon which I can't quite put a finger which doesn't work for me. I think it's the fact that the visible edge of the gate doesn't appear vertical. Understand this is a perspective issue, but it still bothers my eye a little.

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    Yep, agreed. I might be able to fix it with a slight rotation and nicking the far edge of the gate from another similar image.

    Bottom line is I missed the shot by not noticing those details - will try to do better next time...

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    I like it..but with you guys on the door.

    On another note..love your logo

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