My girl

[tomorrowstreasures]

This is my daughter, Paige. She is getting married in June. This photo was taken in a bridal shop as she was trying on gowns.

[tirediron]

Hmmm.... REALLY like the idea, not so fussed about the execution. I think it needs just a touch more DoF around her face; enough have sharp focus down to say the necklace. Additionally, it's just a bit under-exposed, and the green cast isn't really working for me. That said, I understand this was a 'spur of the moment' shot, and it is a good one.

[Marko]

I very much like the mood you've set for the shot but it's not working for me for 2 reasons. Mostly this shot feels off based on the odd body position in the shot. It looks just a bit too contorted. Second is the focus, it's off. If the whole shot were MORE out of focus, that might work better. Despite this - great mood, you've given the shot a successful old time feel.
And congrats on the marriage!
Marko

[Ben H]

I also like the feel, but agree with the above comments - it feels a bit "chesty" to me - the brightest and largest part of the frame draws the eye, and I'm not sure that's the intended focus point...

[tomorrowstreasures]

Ben - LOL no- not the intention.... i think i was down lower than she was and yes, the girls were so quick. TI - how green is it on your monitor? Mine is a laptop and not calibrated...it shows here not as green but maybe a very slight hint of a green....hmmmm Marko -thanks for the well wishes!

any how - i really appreciate the fb on this one!

just for the heck of it, i am uploading another version of this shot...feel free to c&c

[tirediron]

Very green; your edit has got rid of the green cast, but now looks VERY warm.