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This is a discussion on Out Of Service within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I took this last week at a family oriented theme park called Silver Dollar City. I played around with it ...

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    I took this last week at a family oriented theme park called Silver Dollar City. I played around with it until I came up with this and I liked it. Would like to get critique not only on the picture its self but also on the PP.

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    Almost looks 3D. I don’t really know what to say. It looks good but it almost feels like its missing something. Might be the hdr effect I don’t see much for shadows.

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    I feel, if the top left of the frame was less busy, the shot might be better. The tree bisecting at the seat of the wagon is also a bit distracting.

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    The PP is interesting. I think it is a bit blown out in a few places so that it loses some definition. I like the colour of the wagon.

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    sorry, but for me it's just too busy. if you could isolate the wagon and not have so much detail it would improve greatly. I am not wild about the effect of the processing. I do however, love the subject and the basic comp.
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    Thank you all for your time to look and comment. I think it is interesting how people view photos differentlly. I've gotten firm opinions on both ends of the scale on this. I appreciate all the input that is given here.
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