I like what is lit. I think there is to much dead space at the top and the loss of detail in the shadows does not help the photo. The photo is hard to see if you dont have a big screen so seeing it on a laptop you would have to scrol down to see it all. It almost looks like you cropet the right side of the photo interesting idea if you did.
Any way that's my view can't wate to see more of your work.