Are her Eyes singing enough?

[Mad Aussie]

Here's a shot I took in Dec 07 of my daughter. She's leaving to live with her boyfriend about 14 hrs away so it was time to take those shots we always meant to do. My little girl is leaving home :(

First shot is the original.

Second shot is my digital darkroom effort.

[Marko]

I think the eyes you worked on are good, the shot looks reddish on my monitor though.

[Mad Aussie]

I think the eyes you worked on are good, the shot looks reddish on my monitor though.

I might have to take your advice in the podcast about monitor calibration then.

Do both photos look a bit reddish Marko? Or just the 2nd shot?