I like it. Not sure if the face is a litle too bright or not.

I do find the brick line on the wall coming out of her eye a bit distracting - you could probably burn the brighter parts in a bit to try and tame them.

Lastly, in this case, I find your logo itself is also quite distracting - if it was me, I'd size it down a little and not have it taking up half the width of the photo - it interferes with the subject at this size imo. At least it does for me...

Just my thoughts - other than that, I like it - not sure if the eye is a little soft, perhaps?