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1970 Challenger

This is a discussion on 1970 Challenger within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; This picture is light painting with a bit of photoshop, lights, smoke... Ps: don't be shy to critic....

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    This picture is light painting with a bit of photoshop, lights, smoke...
    Ps: don't be shy to critic.
    when the last tree has died the last river has been poisoned and the last fish has been caught, only then the human race will realized that money can't be eaten.

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    i think the car looks really cool the way its shot. smoke seems a bit off like its going the wrong way,but the big thing for me is the ground and the back ground. it looks to me that its a wall and not ground.

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    Thank you for the comment belliveau, it was actually in the staircase inside.
    when the last tree has died the last river has been poisoned and the last fish has been caught, only then the human race will realized that money can't be eaten.

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    Great shot and beautiful car!!!

    The smoke is doing it more harm than good (IMO).

    Just above the hood latch on the driver's side, there is a deformation in the rock pattern of the background. It is stealing my eye from the car. You may want to clone it out.

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