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    Beautiful colours and wonderful light. A lovely photograph.
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    Hmmm - Although i do like the colour here, since it is the critique forum - my main critique is that i see no focal point.
    On the rare occasion that works for me, but I don't find this is the case here unfortunately.

    In addition, you placed a bright object at the edge of the frame when it could have easily been cropped out.

    I have to ask if this was intentional or an oversight?

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