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The colors are interesting. You may increase the saturation a little bit.
Your clouds could be the main subject but you may like to crop the top to put these on the top third.
Please fix the horizon.
My 2 cents.
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it looks like the start of beautiful day and I may have to hate you for just a little bit.
For me, I'd like to see the horizon straightened and play with some different crops to see the most effective way to present this.
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+1 - If this were mine I'd crop out all the trees - the sky is magic here. It does slope severely to the right though. To my eye on my monitor, the saturation seems lovely as is but individual tastes obviously vary.Originally Posted by ewaizel
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Little more contrast on the cloud. and yes the horizon
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