I quite like this shot and really dig the moody light and expression.

A couple of points for improvement
- The eyelashes in the light should be sharp and they are not
- I'm not crazy about the crop through the chin and I would have liked to see the roundness of the t-shirt at the neck.
- Not sure all the black space on the right contributes here, I think I'd crop most of it out.
Hope that helps
Marko