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Shot of my dd...

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  1. 02-04-2009, 02:12 AM #1
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    Great shot, what an adorable girl, very well done, I cannot see anything I would change.
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    Damn it I'm going to have to agree with AL on this one.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mad Aussie View Post
    Damn it I'm going to have to agree with AL on this one.
    , was bound to happen sooner or later, I am always right, I am kind enough to assume others will be right on occasion also lmmfaooo
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    Quote Originally Posted by AcadieLibre View Post
    , was bound to happen sooner or later, I am always right, I am kind enough to assume others will be right on occasion also lmmfaooo
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    i like this portrait as well - very nice shot but I almost always have something to say...lol - though in this case it's very minor.
    I'd burn in (darken) the hands slightly and darken the top left corner. I might dodge (lighten) the eyes 5% or less.
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    Great picture. One thing though, her skin looks a little blotchy (like a few small places blew out) - not sure because I cannot see the actual image. You might want to edit the catch lights in her eyes. Just a personal thing for me I guess, I don't like the catch lights that show light behind the camera and will sometimes edit an image to get them off to the side. These are just my preferences too, it is a great image aside from that.
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    I love it!
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    Thank-you so much everyone for your replies and suggestions... I played a bit more with it...

    Marko & Mindforge.. did I take your suggestions well?

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