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Kelby World Wide Photo Walk candidates

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    I am posting my candidates for my one photo submission to the Kelby World Wide Photo Walk competition. Any comments/suggestions/critiques/personal picks would be much appreciated. These were all shot with my Canon 7DII with 70-200 f2.8 lens. All are 200mm, ISO 320. It was a cloudy, overcast day which held shadows to a minimum.

    1. Blue Jeans


    2. Party (my wife's favorite)


    3. Trouble (my favorite)


    4. Wedding


    5. Climb


    6. Leica
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    I vote for "Trouble" but I would get rid of the Dad. Sorry Dad. What does everyone else think? I like the "Party" as well because of the socks.

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    Here are my thoughts;

    - my preference with the pictures as is - I like the 'climb'
    - I agree with JAS with 'trouble' - get rid of the dad
    - I do like the 'party' - however the the notch on the back wall at the top left and the bit of space to the right of the bricks on the right side I find distracting. I would crop them out so you would be more focused on the socks
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    I am exactly with asnow on this one.

    The climb, followed by trouble (ideally with dad gone) and then party, with a slight crop.
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    I like "The Party", but you need to crop everything right of the brick column
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    I like the first one best .. blue jeans ... however, i'd crop it just to exclude the omega, and lots of the top ... maybe barely to the top of the truck ....
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