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This is a discussion on New pictures within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Here are new pictures I took with my new lens. This one is through the bushes. Overall not too many ...

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    Here are new pictures I took with my new lens.

    This one is through the bushes.












    Overall not too many good pics because of bad lighting, but some were ok.

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    Had a little accident with the last one:( I opened the back before I rolled up the film on accident.
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    Hmmmm. These photographs do NOT look tack sharp but there are variables besides the lens (like camera shake due to slow shutterspeed)that might be responsible.

    As a test I would tape a piece of newspaper to the wall and put my camera on a tripod with a cable release and take shots at different apertures. The newsprint should be tack sharp.

    Good luck!

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    Quote Originally Posted by marko
    Hmmmm. These photographs do NOT look tack sharp but there are variables besides the lens (like camera shake due to slow shutterspeed)that might be responsible.

    As a test I would tape a piece of newspaper to the wall and put my camera on a tripod with a cable release and take shots at different apertures. The newsprint should be tack sharp.

    Good luck!

    marko
    It was not too bright out the days I was shooting, so I had to use a large aperature and slow speed for most of the pictures. I think I'll shoot off the end of this roll right now and get them developed too. I am experimenting with bulb opening pictures and different effects and iluminations.

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    I would also take a careful look at the articles in www.photoinf.com for helpful information on framing and composing shots.

    Some of the dog shots would have been better in the portrait/vertical view rather than the landscape/horizontal view. Background should also NOT distract from the main subject which means that it should be clear of parts of furniture and other objects.

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    Last edited by tegan; 04-05-2007 at 07:50 PM.

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