This is a discussion on I(Eye) Spy within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Originally Posted by jjeling
Good concepts again. I love the ideas your throwing out. You can tell your starting to ...
Good concepts again. I love the ideas your throwing out. You can tell your starting to create images instead of just snapping away. I like the first one the best here. My attention is really drawn to the mask in the foreground. However, its out of focus, so your sent to the image between the mask to look at another figure. Great idea! However, you are probably already aware of the highlight area to the right of the face. Its really distracting. I might try burning the highlighted area, and dodging the face to draw a little more attention to it.
The exposure in the second one seems a little dark to me. Even with the correct exposure, I like the first.
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