Welcome Phoenixolivia!

This is a VERY strong photograph and very well done in my opinion.

I like the composition and the framing and the connection you have with the subjects... and it does what I love photographs to do...It tells a story in one frame.

If this were my shot, I might try to burn in (darken) the highlight at the top right a wee bit and perhaps a wee bit of sharpening on the face in the foreground - but these are just minor ameliorations to an already fantastic photo.

Great Job!

Marko