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    Default White Widow

    I hope I had more time. I am simply overwelmed by the good work I see posted in here. This one is for you. I am sure some will find that I could have played more with depth of field. I tried but came back with this one has my favorite.

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    This is a Snow Queen Clematis, bought for a few dollars at Costco while waiting for spring. It was ready to bloom.
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    Very pretty. It does look like a spider. I love the white on white!

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    Very nice shot...different and quite spidery indeed.
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    Great composition! Never seen this flower before, very nice. I think it could have been more sharp towards the middle of the flower and have the entire photo a bit brighter, (might just be my screen) but looks a little dull. Great job over all though.

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    Ugh, spider! Just....ewwwww! That's really creepy, dude! But great comp nonetheless *thumbs up*
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    Default Thanks for the comments.

    I still have to understand the various techniques to improves sharpness in photoshop or Lightroom.

    BTW this is a Clematis Snow Queen that I am growing in house while outside temperature rise in Montreal. It shall be impressive covering an entire wall.
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    This image needs a contrast boost and it looks like it has a bluish cast. Nice shot aside from that!
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    Default Bulbs seems to need time before being stable

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    This image needs a contrast boost and it looks like it has a bluish cast. Nice shot aside from that!
    Quite true. Starting now I am using a white card before and after shooting sessions. Doing so and under artificial lighting I did observe a difference lightiing temperature. Just like the bulbs, aquire their final color cast only after a certain period of time.

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    white subject on a white background usually is hard to handle the exposure. you did a great job.

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