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    Ok, just let me know where I can improve the image, like angle, or what effect I can add, or if it's ok the way it is.
    Actually I don't want to be ok, I want to be very good, so any critiques are welcome.
    I will try to post a bigger version of the image.

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    Yeah, I'm like, well you could... and then you could have... maybe you should have... but I'm not seeing it. Someone better will have to pick this apart. I think it's great!
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    http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3346/...38dbfcc7_o.jpg

    Here is a better version, hope will work.
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    The bigger one is much nicer. I like the shot as well. I wish the whole dock-structure thing was larger though...maybe that's just me. This image has many possibilities for further play. I might try playing with the water's tones a bit more perhaps a wee bit lighter. Was this indeed shot close to 10 PM at night?
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    I like it, it is a good photo but I find the dock too centered in the photo, throws the perspective off. I think the dock should have been lower in the shot. Great cloud formation, clear. The dock also ends to bluntly to close to the edge of the frame, you follow it with your eyes and it just stops with no lead off. As always just my
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    Something is not in the right place, or could be in a better angle, as Acadia says.
    I shot this at quarter to 10, because it wasn't dark outside, I mean I could still catch that sky.

    I'll try to take another shot, and to follow Acadie's suggestions, but the dock is not too long. I'll see there, what can I do.

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