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    Your comments are very welcome.
    I am a beginner and I would like to know what I would improve.
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    Overall it is VERY good. The sky is a distracting and there is a white object above the bread basket. Nice concept and I like the comp
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    I think I'd like to see the mountains higher in the shot compared to the table food and much more saturated. Sky is somewhat blown and needs darkening as scorpio pointed out. Hope that helps - Marko
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    Can't really add to the comments above. It's a different shot though. I like that.

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    This is a very interesint picture, I see light on the tip of the table, this light could have been used to lighten up the whole table.
    Eggs. why eggs?
    One glass seems like you got there first and sip a bit, this is no good.
    Juice? Why isnt that jar a milk jar?
    Behind the bread basket I see the tip of a mug?

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    Very nice picture !!!

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    Agree with the above, and add that I think it could stand to be leveled, but I like it!

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    I hadn’t noticed the light in the table (I could used that) and the tip of mug behind the bread basket.

    I will try to saturate it and make the sky a little darker.

    These food were served by the hotel, I don’t even remember if I had to rearrange or not, I don’t know “why eggs”

    Thanks, I appreciated all comments.

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