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    The upper sepal is gently brushing the lower petal and reminds me of my last SPA moment.

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    I like this shot but think it could be improved. For me the shot is all about the water droplets not the 'brushing' aspect (though I do see it since you titled the shot that way and explained it). The left 3rd of the image isn't doing that much for me and I might crop that side close to the droplet at top left.
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    I was going to say exactly the same thing. The lower third only distracts from the rest of the photo (the part where you want us to focus our attention).

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    I agree with the 3rd of the photo. I like this shot though! Beautiful focus. I am a fan of water droplets on leaves and flowers!

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