Fashion

**Chantelle** · 06-22-2009, 10:45 PM

Here's a few more shot of Amanda. Any critques?

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**Mad Aussie** · 06-23-2009, 05:17 AM

I really like the 2nd, 3rd and 4th shots.

I really have nothing to say as critique I don't think. These are really good.

If I nitpick I could maybe suggest the last shot was cropped so that piece of her hair that's 'above' (to the right as we look) her head is cropped through to match the fact her body is cropped also. Not sure if that makes sence and as I said ... nitpicking entirely.

Great shots.

**AntZ** · 06-23-2009, 07:49 AM

Originally Posted by Mad Aussie

I really like the 2nd, 3rd and 4th shots.
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Yep, 2,3 & 4 are great.
Maybe a bit of glamour blur to 2 & 3 to hide some skin imperfections.

**Chantelle** · 06-23-2009, 08:51 AM

Ok I added a glamour blur to these, is that better?

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**jlabel** · 06-23-2009, 08:57 AM

You need to get some more facial expression from her, and her skin tone was... greenish?

**Chantelle** · 06-23-2009, 09:00 AM

Doesn't look green on my screen, her skin was more yellow than anything. She is a new model and doesn't do extremely well with her expressions.

**Marko** · 06-23-2009, 09:00 AM

Sure we always got somethin' to say

Shot 1- Not crazy about this pose. the model looks stiff here, a 45 degree angle would have looked better imo
Shot2 - an interesting pose, sexy. The eyes could be just a bit brighter and sharper (they are quite good already though)
shot3 - My fave of the lot. Model looks great. eye brightness quite good, eye sharpness very good.
Shot 4 - has a very sexy feel to it. Model looks good eyes are sharp (though the model's left eye looks like it has an eyelash/dust in it) maybe the cropping at left is a bit tight.

Hope that helps - Marko