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    My new bike! My mom actually bought it as an early birthday gift.





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    Lovely looking bike, and great shots and tones.

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    Thanks, Antz! There is an Australian Winery called 'Hill of Content' that has a picture of a bicyclist pedaling up a hill with a couple of bottles of wine in the basket in the back. I imagine the Townie as my version of that but instead of the wine I have the camera.
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    Its a such a cool looking bike. So retro, but with all the good bits.

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    The bike does absolutely nothing for me. But I love this shot! It's really well lit. Excellent post production, great tone and colour and a superb location! Nice job!
    Was this a Lightroom preset treatment?

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    The first shot feels like a portrait with two subjects. I would have preferred just the bike or just the arch.

    The second might be better with the exposure taken down a bit.

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    Here we go:




    The first shot is a bit of a satire on how they place cars in magnificent locations.
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    Sweet ride! I like the treatment done on the second one. Gives it an old feeling but you know it's new.

    Enjoy the new ride
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    Thanks, Kat. That was what I thought as well, gives it a sixties feel, I think.

    The first photo is done with a Photoshop add on - Topaz Adjust.

    The second is a Lightroom preset called Zurich Street Scene.

    The sea of white stuff in the background is cotton from the cotton poplars that were planted in the park about 50+ years ago.
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    I like #2 as well...enjoy the ride... give me a jingle if you wanna go biking sometime!
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