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This is a discussion on Girl Interrupted within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; It's an edgy shot for sure. What do you think?...

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    It's an edgy shot for sure. What do you think?

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    Well captured. I think though I'd like to see a little more detail and definition in the face. Her expression and mood are critical to the impact of this image, and with the deep shadows, it's hard to see exactly what she's feeling.

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    I know this is supposed to be creepy, but the backlighting makes the arm hair a little too creepy. And I agree that there's too much shadow in the face. Always good to see something different, though.
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    Uhuuu - that's giving me the willies (am I using the right expression?). There was once a movie ... "Carrie" I guess. She would be fitting. So it is a working treatment for me.

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    Yup..works for me too! Crazy shot!
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    Quote Originally Posted by MoinMoin View Post
    that's giving me the willies (am I using the right expression?).
    Correct..well its something someone might say in Australia.

    I like this image, well constructed and composed.

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    I like the mood of this picture but there is something creepy about her hands leading up to her arms. They look like they were pasted on as the edges seem to defined.

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    This is awesome! Really well done!

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    Great shot man! Can't help but see a man posing as a girl here. The bear is classic as a prop

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    Very scary picture. Maybe you should photoshop (or gimp) the tripod leg off

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