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    This is my first photo posted so be nice. Image of local skate park with some great concrete shapes.
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    Love the tones in this B&W. Nice work Nijip. Welcome to the forum. I hope you are enjoy your stay.
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    The only thing i can see that may need a wee bit of adjustment is the top prop looking thing... maybe a bit of lightening it up
    i like the sculptural aspect of it too!

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    Very well done. This shows a degree of creativity and I like it a lot.
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    nice shot! i love the contrast and the vignetting, the only real problem i have with this shot is the corner of the manual box at the bottom of the picture, it looks to be at a weird angle and IMO is very distracting. But i don't want to see it go, maybe if it was shot at a lower angle, and centered the corner,the lines might work a little better and you could get a dof that would create eye flow to all those lovely shapes in the background. i feel it would improve this shot greatly.
    but still not a bad shot by any means! Its perfect to have a skater overcrook that rainbow rail! (sorry i am assuming you shoot skate, if you don't that was all gibberish!lol)
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    Thanks for the advice folks. I'll try some dodging and burning... which i learnt from a previous podcast and see if i can improve it.

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