Agree with AL on the car/background issue. There's also the matter of the blue paint on the trunk and on the lower railing. IMO, to really 'get' a shot like is difficult. You need to have the perfect background and perfect focus. I'm not a huge fan of unfocused foregrounds; I'd like to see a sharp foreground merging to a soft background. I seem to recall some nice chunks of fence near (I think) Cambridge Battery in Point Pleasant Park that might work.