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    Hi Guys,
    I'm new here but that doesn't mean that you have to be kind

    How can I improve this shot? The noise is high and it's not sharp enough in my opinion. Shot at ISO 800 :(

    All comments and critics are welcome.

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    I think you pretty much nailed what you thought was wrong with the photo. How come such a high ISO and it still seems a bit dark.
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    Looks like alot of cropping, high iso and exposure is off. It is a tough one to get perfect with the light / bright background and the dark haired hairy guy.
    At higher iso's you really have to limit the cropping.

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    Thanks guys. It's shot at 200mm and cropped to get this composition.
    The subject is too dark but if I try to correct it, the noise comes up again.

    He's one of my neighbors. I'll just wait for him to go out again

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    I love the composition of this though so definitely get him to come out again.
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    Nice composition, I am starting to see more and more good pictures in this forum this is good.

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    Thanks guys. I like the composition and the contrast also. But it's ruined with the noise.

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    Have you tried it in B/W where the noise/grain can be more acceptable? Whats causing the strong background shadow?

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    Quote Originally Posted by adenough View Post
    Have you tried it in B/W where the noise/grain can be more acceptable? Whats causing the strong background shadow?
    Yes. But it doesn't give the same drama or contrast (blue, Yellow).

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