Puppy Story Board

[Chantelle]

Here's my first story-board, this is Marlee absolutely buggered after his morning walk. What do you think?

[AntZ]

Going...Going...Gone Cute sequence.
Not too much to Critique, maybe a shallower DOF to blur the background. I also find a border around each frame looks nice and helps separate the frames.

[Bambi]

I love it!
He's a born model!

[Marko]

I really like this Chantelle!
Totally agree with Antz on the Bkgd, it's only slightly distracting though..... in this case I think a plain wall would have been best.
Hope that helps - Marko

[Chantelle]

Thanks everyone. That's just where he ended up laying, so couldn't help the background unless I actually slide him across the floor to a different bg.

I debated with myself about the borders between the frames, I left it with no border because I often see these story-boards with no border.

[kat]

Very nice! I love these kind of images and sets!