Results 1 to 7 of 7

Broken Bike

This is a discussion on Broken Bike within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I was in a bit of a playing/experimenting mood yesterday and was wondering if I could turn this relatively uninteresting ...

  1. #1
    casil403's Avatar
    casil403 is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    Calgary Canada
    Posts
    6,612
    My Photos
    Please do NOT edit my photos
    Critiques
    Only critique photos posted in the critique forum

    Default Broken Bike

    I was in a bit of a playing/experimenting mood yesterday and was wondering if I could turn this relatively uninteresting shot of a broken bike into something a bit more interesting. I realize it has sort of gone beyond the idea of a photograph but I am curious to know your thoughts.
    When I took the shot I thought it might have potential for some experimentation and am wondering if it works or not. Just trying to keep inspired and to challenge myself a little in pp editing.
    Anyhow thanks.....

    "Life is like photography, we develop from the negatives"-anonymous
    My website: www.albertaandbeyond.com

  2. #2
    AntZ's Avatar
    AntZ is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2009
    Location
    Australia
    Posts
    2,290
    My Photos
    Please feel free to edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    Its an interesting treatment. It does make it a little difficult to separate the bike from the post. The composition is OK, just a bit tight on the right. I'd like to see more of the bike.

  3. #3
    Marko's Avatar
    Marko is offline Administrator
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    Montreal, QC. Canada
    Posts
    14,870
    My Photos
    Please do NOT edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    Very interesting shot and angle! though I agree with Antz - this treatment makes it harder to see the bike.

    I do like the tones here and although I'm not sure what treatment you used, the shot looks way oversharpened.

    I'd love to see the shot in its natural state.
    - Please connect with me further
    Photo tours of Montreal - Private photography courses
    - Join the new Photography.ca Facebook page
    - Follow me on Twitter http://twitter.com/markokulik
    - Follow me on Google+ https://plus.google.com/u/0/111159185852360398018/posts
    - Check out the photography podcast


    "You have to milk the cow quite a lot, and get plenty of milk to get a little cheese." Henri Cartier-Bresson from The Decisive Moment.

  4. #4
    tirediron is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jul 2008
    Posts
    1,201

    Default

    It's interesting, but I'm finding the treatment a little extreme for my taste. Is there anything in here that would be a good candidate for selective colouration? Say the posts to which the bike is attached (assuming they're not black).

  5. #5
    Bambi's Avatar
    Bambi is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Location
    Nova Scotia
    Posts
    9,755
    My Photos
    Please ask before editing my photos

    Default

    I agree too. I like the treatment but it is hard to see the bike.
    Feel free to make comments on any of my shots

    my blog: http://bambesblog.blogspot.com/

    My flickr photostream: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bambe1964/

    A painter takes their vision and makes it a reality. A photographer takes reality and makes it their vision.

  6. #6
    casil403's Avatar
    casil403 is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    Calgary Canada
    Posts
    6,612
    My Photos
    Please do NOT edit my photos
    Critiques
    Only critique photos posted in the critique forum

    Default

    ...I guess I should have called it "Broken Wheel" as it was the wheel I was more after and not the bike.
    This is way beyond my editing preferences as well but I guess in trying the extreme end of pp (I find it too much for my taste as well) perhaps my thinking was I could find something in between (what I like and what I don't) while experimenting. Pushing the envelope so to speak.
    This is an HDR shot thrown into extreme Topaz Adjust and then converted to BW...I didn't really do much else to this in Lightroom after except for resizing it.

    Thanks again for the comments.......
    "Life is like photography, we develop from the negatives"-anonymous
    My website: www.albertaandbeyond.com

  7. #7
    jlabel is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    Brazil - Sao Paulo
    Posts
    298

    Default

    I liked the idea, but to me it is too overdone.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36