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light and dark the sequel

This is a discussion on light and dark the sequel within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; I posted a picture in the 'show your photos' but probably should have put it here since I wondered about ...

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    Smile light and dark the sequel

    I posted a picture in the 'show your photos' but probably should have put it here since I wondered about the crop (after I posted).
    Here's the original:


    crop 1 shows a bit of the bank but cuts out the swamp:


    and here's an even smaller crop:



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    Both crops work for me. although I think I favour the second.

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    I like both crops as well; I would consider though, going back to the pixel room and perhaps doing some leves/curves adjustments and/or burning and dodging to produce a more even sky. As is, I find the darker sky top left to be a bit of a distraction.

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    I like both crops as well!

    I guess it depends on whether you want the lake included or not.

    I think the 2nd crop without the lake it actually a bit more impacting.

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    Lovely image!

    I like the original crop the best!

    IMO all it needs is a bit of dodging at the bottom.
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    thanks for the input guys. TI-how would I go about lightening up that sky with all those branches in the way? I am new to the whole burn/dodge thing.
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    Both crops are good. I was torn between the two. I like the original crop the best. Nice work
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