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This is a discussion on Fire Fun within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Took this shot while getting the grill ready....

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    Took this shot while getting the grill ready.
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    Cool! Would have been great to see more of the fire itself as well.

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    Looks more like a bonfire!

    I take it you are not a propane person

    D'oh! Just realized this was the critique thread.

    Hmmm. Hard to critique as it's not my type of shot but I think I would like it better if you either showed more of the main fire or none at all.
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    now this would allow me to get my marshmallows just the way I like them!!

    I like the sparks here. I am with MA that seeing more of the fire would help complete the image. My eye keeps going there wanting to look down. Or an alternative is to cut out the flame all together and crop to just the sparks. If you did the crop it would more abstract but interesting I think.


    I hope I don't see it out on the deck tonight though (husband in grilling some steaks)!
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