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    this one i've left untouched in post-processing,
    any suggestions?
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    I think this is a nice shot actually, I like it.

    To make it even stronger I would increase the overal contrast as on my monitor the image looks a bit flat. I would also sharpen a bit more and darken the top third of the photo.

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    I like it too... how did you get that cross filter effect? was it natural?
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    that cross filter effect is natural - remember, i dont have any fun accessories or gadgets just yet! (and i honestly dont know how to add that stuff in postprocessing either, if its possible - hahaha)

    heres a couple altered versions. i sharpened it like you said marko, but had a hard time with the contrast. if i increase it, the centre of the sun sparkles get too clumped together, too bright. i played with the color, warmth & coolness, and saturation a bit too, obviously...

    which do you prefer? i think i like the warmer myself.
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    I like them both.... not sure what I'd do to make them any better.... maybe different crops? I dunno they look good...
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    thanks! its just a fun shot.
    i do notice now, a little distortion on the upper lefthand side.
    water ripples or something...
    might end up doing as you suggested and crop it a bit.

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