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This is a discussion on The Lemon within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; This is a shot of a lemon I thought it would come out pretty cool as a HDR and this ...

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    This is a shot of a lemon I thought it would come out pretty cool as a HDR and this is what the result was.

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    I like this...nice and creative...well done. Someone might find some way to improve it but I quite like it as it is.
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    That's something different. I wouldn't have thought HDR would be needed at all, and perhaps it wasn't, but it's an interesting result.
    I think, due to the creativeness here it doesn't really need much in the way of critique.
    If I were to offer anything I think I'd have liked to see the lemon sharper is all.

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    cool shot I like the vivid colours... I agree with MA that the lemon could be sharper... but then the bubbles look pretty sharp at this size...

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    I actually would agree with you guys about the sharpness. What do yall thing about the little lens flares from all the bubbles? Does that add to the picture or take away from it?
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    I didn't pick those as lens flares at all and I think they definitely add to the photo.

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    I love the colours and think that the lemon being soft adds to the shot. It contrasts well with the sharp bubbles. I also like the lens flare. I can totally see this on the wall of a cafe or a restaurant.
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